I need some #readerFeedback

Hey everybody,
I am studk in the middle of editing A Journey of Faith,and there is a scene that doesn’t work at the beginning of Chapter 7. Ok, as you know, Becca has witnessed something from her childhood that has traumatized her for the past 16 years. Not only that, but the Tensiltown police have been called to Sweet Water Park in Springville to investigate several attempts to sabotage the climbing paths.
Here’s where the trouble lies.at the beginning of Chapter 7, Angel, and her two children have been reunited with William after a few weeks. This is supposed to be a Christian suspense novel, so I was wondering if Becca should reunite this family she spends a coupld of days with along her way, or should something happen to the father to further test not only the small family’s faith, but that of my protagonist as well? Please forgive the lack of pictures, I am visually impaired, and I have some trouble finding pictures I can’t see.
Please let me know what you think, for although this is my novel, I want to know what my readers want to see happen in my story. Thanks for your feedback, and happy writing.
Blessings to you all,


Jesus saves

Dear readers,

Hello, I am writing to you  to ask you some questions for you to think about today.  First of all, Do you feel that you are fulfilling what God wants you to do in your life?  Do you feel like he is moving you in a different direction?  If this is the case, I strongly urge you to ask him to lead direct and guide you according to His will. However, if you feel that there is no hope, turn to Jesus.  Do you know Jesus as your personal Lord and Savior?  If not, now’s the time to fall on your knees and pray for forgiveness of your many sins, and ask God to come into your heart and take control of your life before it is eternally too late.  Now is the time to make a change in your life. 

Love and prayers to all my readers in wordpress land. May God richly bless you and keep you. For Our heavenly Father, and Our Lord Jesus Christ are worthy to be praised.  Romans 8:28 states that all things work for good to them that call upon the name of the Lord.  Blessed be the name of the Lord.  God has a mission for each of His children, What is your calling? If you don’t know the answer to this question, I urge you to ask God to use you according to His purpose, for it is His will not my will, or your will be don. To God be the Glory the Honor and Praise!